ChioBam's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Awoken]

Very smooth,

This just makes me feel good, the synth guitar, is just brilliant, you have a way with melodies, it seems. When I hear this piece, I just think of ice, but warmer, I enjoy the pick up at around 1:38, it flows nicely. You threw in the instrument at 2:04 very well I must say, you're great with fading things in and out. Again, very impressive. 10/10 5/5

[Strong Grasp]

Very well done,

I enjoy the melody, and I enjoy the transition, a lot of songs like this just stick to one melody the entire time, changing the tone used for it every now and then, you made several sweet, sweet transitions to awesome melodies, while still sticking to the initial melody, keeping the feel of the song fresh and alive. Again, I can't get over how well you pulled off the transitions, a common issue among artists I've noticed is making transitions flow. You're clearly not new to this by the amount of songs you've got going on, but the amount of transitions you're making and how well you're doing them is just surprising to me, so excellent job on that.

The transitions at 3:13, however, was far too abrupt, consider revising that, make a build up to it, not just a descend and a sudden pick up, it just didn't flow well, but everything else was absolutely fantastic. I'm impressed. 10/10 5/5

fergyanimated responds:

Cheers dude, im glad u liked it... cause i didnt much!

[Dear Amy.]

Chilling. Excellent,

This is excellent, I can feel this song, not just hear it. Everything was played out perfectly, and it fits what you're writing about perfectly. The best songs are the ones that you can just let flow, and you did that quite well. 10/10 5/5, excellent job.

Johnnyoctane responds:

Its really nice to hear that, i'm glad the song had the effect for others that it had for me.

[My Final Words]

I couldn't get into it,

It was far too short, the whole thing felt like a build up for something way better, which I hope you end up doing with this. It was good, but only for an intro and not a full song, add onto this. 6/10 3/5

Johnnyoctane responds:

I wanted it too be short, its supposed to portray a man on his deathbed kinda and its like the words he is saying, i have been very tempted to add another bar though.

[Autumn Moon Dreams]

Pretty damn good,

I like the tone used in the intro, overall this has a very whimsical feel to it. Something I'd like to hear in Banjo and Kazooie, to be quite honest, right up until it actually starts sounding like electronic, then it's just straight up cool. I can definitely dig this song. I like the melody at around 1:48 a lot. Not much more I can say, this was very well done! My favorite part is at the beginning though, 9/10 5/5

[[A Favour House Atlantic]]

Quite good, a bit sloppy

I definitely like the feel of this song, has a very upbeat melody. Only problem I see is with the guitar and how it sounds very sloppy while you palm mute it or strum. The drum tracks aren't bad either, it definitely plays out very well with the song. Overall, I give this an 8/10 4/5, nice job!

MrJoesseppi responds:

Thanks for the feedback, I know what you mean about the guitar, I will try and sort this out in future recordings and will put in more effort in the quality and performance. Thanks Again!

[Ear Rape!!]

You hit the genre spot on,

I just dislike the genre, I suppose the entire point of the genre is to have a beat such as this with a trance-like sound going on at the same time, I do find that a bit boring, isn't there something you could give it so the piece has more life? I know you don't have to have the same sound going on for the entire song, especially one such as that, maybe a more melodic tone, rather than a monotonous droning sound? Anyway, as far as what you're aiming for you did quite well, 9/10 4/5, good job.

[To The Hill Cloud]

Heh,

I imagine an epic chase through a jungle when I hear this, I wish the song wasn't predominantly drums though, it could be much better. Overall though, this is just pretty decent, I give it a 6/10 3/5

XiruX responds:

Im really glad you liked it..

[Evil whistle theme]

Again, very nice.

You definitely hit the evil feel spot on, once again, you never cease to impress, all of the songs by you I've listened to were impressive beyond the need to explain. So this is all I give you! 10/10 5/5, good job!

[Lmdd (Metal ver)]

Sick,

I love the intro, I absolutely love it, I don't usually dig the whole scoopy sound you're using for the guitar, but it works quite well for this, so very nice. This is some epic metal, if I do say so myself. Really not much I can say, I'm not gonna go and compliment all of the subtleties, so good job, 9/10 5/5.